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2007年高考英語讀寫任務(wù)題品讀
一、試題：第二節(jié) 讀寫任務(wù)(共l小題，滿分25分)
閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
dear ari,
as you sleep in my arms, i'm amazed at how light you feel. i stare at your tiny body, so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air. i love this feeling of protecting you and dreaming of all i have in store for you.
i intend to bring you up to be brave and successful in an often difficult society. that's why your mommy and i have named you ari, which means "lion". it's our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others.
before you came into the world, we had spent months imagining what you'd be like. would you be a boy or a girl? would you look like mommy, daddy or your elder brothers? anyway, we would find out soon.
finally your mother's labor came. and several hours later, we met the first time. i held you high up in the air. i then was able to cut your umbilical cord (臍帶) and put you in your mother's arms. she still had enough energy to radiate the love while she pressed you to her face.
and here we are tonight. as i hold you close, you sleep so peacefully. i press my ear to your chest and hear your strength. i am listening to the first beats of a lion's heart. welcome to the world, ari.
love,
daddy
[寫作內(nèi)容]
假設(shè)你就是信中的ari，父親在你出生的時(shí)候?qū)懥诉@封信。今天是父親50歲生日，你準(zhǔn)備以寫信的方式，祝賀他的生日。以下是信的內(nèi)容(信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好)：
1．以約30個(gè)詞概括父親在他信中對你的期望；
2．以約120個(gè)詞表達(dá)你對父親的感恩，并包括如下要點(diǎn)：
(1)讀信后的感受；
(2)以你自己成長的經(jīng)歷說明你的感受；
(3)表達(dá)你對父親的感激和祝福。
[寫作要求]
1．作文中可使用自己的親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接 引用原文中的句子；
2．信中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。
二、評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
項(xiàng)目 分值 評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
概括 5 按照要求概括了全部主要信息, 沒有增加與原文無關(guān)的信息, 沒有照抄原文的句子。語言結(jié)構(gòu)正確，行文規(guī)范。
4 基本按照要求概括了主要信息, 沒有增加與原文無關(guān)的信息, 沒有照抄原文的句子。語言結(jié)構(gòu)正確，行文規(guī)范。
3 基本按照要求概括了主要信息, 但包含一些不相關(guān)的信息, 有個(gè)別句子抄自原文。語言結(jié)構(gòu)基本正確，行文比較規(guī)范。
2 不能按照要求概括主要信息, 包含較多不相關(guān)的信息, 有較多的抄襲原。語言結(jié)構(gòu)不夠正確，行文不夠規(guī)范。
0---1 沒有按照要求概括主要信息, 基本是不相關(guān)的信息, 大多數(shù)句子都照抄原文。語言結(jié)構(gòu)不正確，行文不規(guī)范。
寫作 18---20 包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題明確，內(nèi)容豐富。詞匯豐富，用詞得當(dāng)。能有效運(yùn)用合適的語言結(jié)構(gòu)，而且沒有（或較少）語法錯誤。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性好。
14---17 包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題明確，個(gè)別內(nèi)容不準(zhǔn)確或者不相關(guān)。詞匯較豐富，有個(gè)別用詞錯誤。較好地運(yùn)用了合適的語言結(jié)構(gòu)，有少許的語法錯誤。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性較好。
11---13 包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題比較明確，個(gè)別內(nèi)容不準(zhǔn)確或不相關(guān)。詞匯較豐富，有個(gè)別用詞錯誤。較好地運(yùn)用合適的語言結(jié)構(gòu)，有少許的語法錯誤。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性較好。
7---10 包含題目所給的部分內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題基本明確，有些內(nèi)容不準(zhǔn)確或者不相關(guān)。詞匯有限，有較多的用詞錯誤。語言結(jié)構(gòu)出現(xiàn)較多的語法錯誤。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性差。
4---6 只包含題目所給的個(gè)別內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。多數(shù)內(nèi)容不相關(guān)或者不準(zhǔn)確。文章有些地方照抄原文。詞匯貧乏，有較多的用詞錯誤。大多數(shù)的句子出現(xiàn)語法錯誤。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性差。
1---3 只包含與題目所給要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容有關(guān)的一些單詞。主題不明確，文章基本照抄原文。詞匯及其貧乏，基本不能正確用詞。幾乎沒有正確的句子。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)零亂。
0 以下幾種情況，給0分：
1） 完全抄襲原文（或其它文章）
2） 文不對題
3） 只寫一些零散的單詞，完全沒有表達(dá)完整的內(nèi)容。
三、任務(wù)型寫作評卷場評分細(xì)則
◆概括
1．完全不理解，照抄原文 0分
2．死板機(jī)械地抄，不改變原文順序 1分
3．改變主語或賓語的抄為主 2 分 (靈活地抄)
4．稍為改動總體的抄 3分
5．改變句子、用詞，重新排列組織 4—5分 (字?jǐn)?shù)不特別要求)
◆120字自主寫作
1．感想，語言，內(nèi)容，連貫性
2．語言為主, 內(nèi)容的相關(guān)部分，綜合考慮連貫
3．首先看語言是否合格
4．內(nèi)容： 讀后的感受, 成長的感受, 感激和祝福
5．用了閱讀理解中的素材不算抄襲
6．內(nèi)容偏離的時(shí)候以語言為主
四、學(xué)生習(xí)作選評給分情況
1 ( 1+5=6分)
dear dad,
on this date of your 50th birthday, mom gave me the letter. you wrote me when i was born 18 years ago. in your letter, you hope me up to successful and brave in society, and you named me is ari, means strong and do well for myself, you wish i love you and mommy.
i very love you and mother, because not only you and mom love me, but also you do every think is due to me. when i was ill, you and mom are very busy for me, give me best love. now i was 18 years ago. i become a strong and can do well for myself. i think you for you and mom. i’ll use my all love for you, but sorry, i didn’t can earn the money for you, because i have to study. so hope you wait me.
i wish you strong and healthy all the life.
2 ( 2+9=11分)
in you letter, daddy, i know that you hope me grow strong and eager grasp. you love me, you give the best for me. you imagining i will be like a lion who is brave.
i felt very warm when i reading your letter. in my growing road you give me the best. when i in trouble, you give the help for me first. if i make mistake, you won’t angry for me, you only give me a warm love. in my life, you and mum’s love is full of it. i can grow up without your love.
happy birthday, daddy. i won’t make you sad, i would be a brave and success lion while you hope me to be in the difficult society.
thank you. dad. i love you and mum forever.
3 ( 0+13=13分)
in your letter, i know i was a lovely boy in your life, and i was know that lots of funny things happen before i was born.
in my living, i was happy and lucky, because i believe you on doing a lot things that make me happy. when i was young, you often tell strong to me, you often play games with me though you are very busy. when i was ill, you will take me to the hospital first, when i go to school, you often tell me to take care of myself and don’t break the traffic rude. after i guard from high school, you show me a lot of fresh things that i had never come through.
words fails me to express my thankful to you. now, i dust hope can live happily and have a strong body. what’s more, wish you will healthy forever.
4 ( 3+16=19分)
dear dad,
you encouraged me to be a brave and successful person. you were eager to see my good performances, which should be strong, seize every opportunity, do well for everybody. i keep your words on my mind and work hard all these years.
i’m totally moved by your words, my great father. i’m touched by your happiness, gave wishes and love in the letter.
words fail to express how i appreciate you. i remember the day you taught me swimming. you put me into the centre of the swimming poor, just as if i were a brave lion and left me. i struggled to catch you but i couldn’t. you lifted me up a while and then back to water. i was able to swim that day and i was strong both physically and mentally. thank you, dad.
today is your 50th birthday. i’m here to say, thank you, thank you for your love and sorrow. thank you for the warmth and health. i can’t be here without you. i love you.
wish you a happy birthday and happy all your life. wish you in good health everyday. happy birthday to you.
5 ( 5+18=23分)
in your letter, you wished me to be strong-minded and successful. you were looking forward seeing me tight for my future bravely and do well for myself and others.
after reading this letter, i feel quite shocked at your expectation on me. i also feel ashamed for not having performed well to meet your demand.
i still remember when i was in primary school, i failed to apply myself to studying. i was addicated to computer games. as a conseque i soon became the last one in my class. you didn’t abuse me at all. on the contrary, you teached me that studying was the most important object at the moment and encouraged me to study hard. only when i have read your letter did i realize that i behaved so bad at that time and you were so sad to see i didn’t do well for myself.
i can’t help expressing my gratitude and sending my best wishes to you, wish you healthy and happy. i promise that i will spare no effort to satisfy you demand of being a brave and successful person.