假設你是李華,你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學校學中文,來信請你在學校附近為他找一套住房。請根據圖畫提供的信息,寫信介紹住房的情" />
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高考英語滿分作文-租房
假設你是李華,你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學校學中文,來信請你在學校附近為他找一套住房。請根據圖畫提供的信息,寫信介紹住房的情況,并告知住房面積為25平方米,月租500元。
注意:1.詞數:100左右:
2.參考詞匯:房租—Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文格式正確,意思表述完整,行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句并用,還使用了以‘which,’引導的非限定性定語從句,從而使文章層次分明,富于變化,不愧為考場佳作。
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譯:
我很高興收到你的信,我很高興地聽到你會去中國且在我們這里學習中文的消息。我已經找到了寓所。在芳草街,不遠處就是我們的中文學校。乘坐11號巴士就可以到達,前一站就是中文學校。寓所是在三樓,有3個房間,其中一個是臥室,其他兩個衛生間和廚房。有一張床,一個沙發和一個辦公桌,25平方米小公寓里有椅子,租金是每月500元。也許這房子不如你的愿望,但我會盡我所能,滿足您的需求。如果還不夠,給我寫信,我會尋找另外一個更好的地方。
希望你能很快來到這里!
就到這里啦!
此致,
李華