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??寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分40分）第一節(jié) 基礎(chǔ)寫作（共1小題，滿分15分）你是校報(bào)小記者，最近進(jìn)行了一次采訪。以下是這次采訪的情況: 時(shí)間: 上周末對(duì)象: 眼科醫(yī)生（eye-doctor）王教授主題: 我國(guó)中小學(xué)生近視（short-sightedness）問題基本信息: （1）發(fā)生率: 略高于50％（2）人數(shù): 世界第一專家解讀: （1）原因: 很復(fù)雜（2）治療: 沒有哪一種藥物能治愈近視（3）建議: 不要過度用眼；多參加戶外活動(dòng)（4）特別提示: 如何握筆也和近視有關(guān)[寫作內(nèi)容]根據(jù)以上情況寫一篇采訪報(bào)道，并包括如下內(nèi)容: 1。
?? 采訪的時(shí)間、對(duì)象和主題；2。 中小學(xué)生近視的發(fā)生率及人數(shù)；3。 專家解讀。[寫作要求]只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。【答案】Last weekend, I had an interview with eye-doctor Professor Wang about our country primary and middle students’ short-sightedness。
?? It is said that slightly more than 50% students, which ranks the No。 1 in the world, are short-sighted。 Professor Wang said the reason of short-sightedness is complicated and three is still no cure for short-sightedness。
?? He suggested that we should not overuse our eyes and do more outdoor exercises。 What’s more, since the holding of pen has something to do with the short-sightedness, we need to pay attention to using the pen。
??【評(píng)析】主要有以下特點(diǎn)：一、作文話題從學(xué)生實(shí)際生活中采點(diǎn)今年基礎(chǔ)寫要求學(xué)生用5句話寫一篇關(guān)于中小學(xué)學(xué)生近視眼的校報(bào)采訪報(bào)道。這個(gè)話題真正的做到“話題來源于學(xué)生實(shí)際生活”。近視眼是每個(gè)校園所必不可少的現(xiàn)象，是學(xué)生校園生活得隱形熱點(diǎn)。因此今年的基礎(chǔ)寫作題目讓每個(gè)學(xué)生都有話可說。
??二、作文話題選材貼近新課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)理念作文話題在引用了醫(yī)生建議的同時(shí)也在暗地里給考生提示該如何保護(hù)眼睛。單從這一點(diǎn)來講，今年的基礎(chǔ)寫作題目成功的做到了“時(shí)刻關(guān)注每一個(gè)學(xué)生的健康成長(zhǎng)”，成功的把新課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)理念注入到學(xué)生的考卷中。三、作文的話題具有極高的深思熟慮性考試的作文話題只有保證每一個(gè)考生都熟悉才能真正的做到命題的公平合理性。
??今年的作文話題從每一所學(xué)校學(xué)生的實(shí)際生活中采點(diǎn)，徹底的革除了城鄉(xiāng)考生因?qū)δ骋粋€(gè)話題了解程度的不同而導(dǎo)致的不合理性。這也說明今年基礎(chǔ)寫作題目的命題人經(jīng)過了多方面的深思熟慮。第二節(jié) 讀寫任務(wù)（共1小題，滿分25分）閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
??Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala（考拉）at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern Australia。 All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining。
?? You would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off。
?? That’s right—sleep it off。 The average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy。
?? The reason Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged and photographed by tourists，who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experience。
?? Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal，which is understandable。
?? How would you react，my friend，if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round，furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you?* 考拉即樹袋熊[寫作內(nèi)容]1。
?? 以約30個(gè)詞概括這段短文的內(nèi)容；2。 然后以約120個(gè)詞就“該不該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照”進(jìn)行議論，內(nèi)容包括: （1）人們?cè)趨⒂^動(dòng)物園時(shí)為什么喜歡和動(dòng)物拍照；（2）假如你處在那些動(dòng)物的處境，你會(huì)有什么反應(yīng)；（3）你認(rèn)為是否應(yīng)該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照。
??[寫作要求]1。 在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2。 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫?！敬鸢浮縏he passage narrates that koalas who are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos。
?? The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals。The reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo perhaps vary from people to people。
?? Some think it a happy reminder of their visit to the zoo or the animals, while others may consider it just sort of fun to have。
?? But anyway they may not share the deep feelings of the animals。If I were in the same position as the animal in the zoo, my reaction would be very severe strongly against being photographed。
?? No having peaceful surroundings to sleep, don’t you suffer restless and fidgets。 No doubt we do and so do the animals。I think it necessary to ban tourists’ taking pictures with animals, making a comfortable environment for them to live and regarding them as our friends, so as to found harmonious relations with animals。
??【評(píng)析】主要有以下特點(diǎn)：一、在考察學(xué)生基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)的同時(shí)也在培養(yǎng)學(xué)生價(jià)值觀的形成今年的讀寫任務(wù)讓學(xué)生就“該不該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照”展開議論。議論文的寫作有助于培養(yǎng)學(xué)生正確的價(jià)值觀，糾正不正確的價(jià)值觀。今年的讀寫任務(wù)暗中旨在培養(yǎng)學(xué)生保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的觀念、把多一點(diǎn)的空間還給動(dòng)物的觀念、與動(dòng)物和諧共存的觀念。
??二、閱讀材料具有很強(qiáng)的傾向性通過瀏覽讀寫任務(wù)的閱讀材料，我們可以感覺到文章運(yùn)用了一種抱怨的寫作方式，即抱怨游客過頻繁的與動(dòng)物園里的動(dòng)物進(jìn)行拍照從而影響到動(dòng)物的正常生活。而讀寫任務(wù)的寫作要求又讓學(xué)生就“該不該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照”展開議論，因此如果考生從“應(yīng)該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照”這一觀點(diǎn)入手的話就迎合了閱讀材料，同時(shí)也能夠受到改卷老師的青睞。
??據(jù)了解，絕大多數(shù)考生都從“應(yīng)該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照”這一觀點(diǎn)入手。